I don't often comment on fanfic in my LJ here, mostly because I don't have time. You know I can never be
brief when I talk about something I've read. I also don't talk much about the books I read. (Currently enjoying Linnea Sinclair's
Gabriel's Ghost).
But I feel like commenting, so... Because of the anniversary of "Kiss Kiss Bang Bang" and the Hart-fest on
guns_n_poodles, and because Jack/John is one of my favourite
Torchwood pairings (and one of the more complex and enigmatic ones), I did a bit of a Captain John Hart fic-binge last night and this morning. One doesn't usually put ratings or warnings on reviews and comments, so be warned, my comments on these stories are somewhat NC-17, reflecting the nature of some of the stories. This is also making me think that my own writing has become very vanilla, and I should do something a little deeper or spicier for a change.
I read:
1.
Mission of Mercy by
51stcenturyfox.
( A series of... )2.
Smile by
anduria_trianys.
( A post-Exit Wounds story, interesting... )3.
Addict by
sistercarrion.
( A post-Kiss Kiss Bang Bang story, as John thinks about Ianto... )4.
Filing Away by
sistercarrion.
( Ianto's point of view used to good effect. )5.
Impossible by
sistercarrion.
( Playing to Captain John's kinks. )5.
Safety Catch by
sistercarrion.
( Sexual fun and games with Jack, Ianto and Captain John. )6.
Share and Share Alike by
sistercarrion.
( No plot here, and almost no theme, just an unrepentant pwp. )7. A selection of drabbles from
sistercarrion:
- Ties that Bind Us - A nice John pov for "Exit Wounds".
- Bleeding Me Dry - tamer than it sounds, given the context.
- Bittersweet - my favourite of these: heartbreaking, and very like I see the Jack/John relationship.
- The Line Drawn in the Sand - Sexy, but the last line, which should have been punchy and strong, failed to convince me. I'm not sure why.
- Sleeping Rough - A cute scenario to say, essentially, the same thing as "The Line Drawn in the Sand" - much subtler and stronger, though not as sexy.
- Spank the Monkey - A cute visual play on John's jacket.
I ran out of time to comment on more, and there was a lot I want to say about
paperclipbitch's
I Nothing But to Please His Fantasy, which was the story that moved me to write down my thoughts in the first place. Nor have I commented personally to these authors on all their stories, as I intended to do before posting this. Ah, well, good intentions remain. I'll write more later.