FIC: Torchwood drabble: Immortality

[fajrdrako]

Title: Immortality
Author: fajrdrako
Fandom: Torchwood
Characters: Captain Jack Harkness, sex alien
Challenge: #14 "The last thing I remember" on tw100
Rating: G
Words: 100
Notes: Spoilers for "Day One".


Immortality

He kissed me, kissed Carys, and he gave me nothing. An infusion of life energy, not sex energy. He felt no lust. His compassion was useless.

His pheromones sang to me. He loved male sexuality as much as I did. Stronger than human, he was desirable by any standards. If I took his body – instead of that foolish weak girl's – we could take on the world together. He would never die. Neither would I.

I prepared to leap. I could feel his anticipation. But of what?

Then I was imprisoned, isolated, dying.

The last thing I remember is his indifference.

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Comments

[sartorias.livejournal.com]

By the time I get to see the show, I won't remember. (I only get to watch TV in summer, and then of course I'm fighting against the other TV-aholics in the family!) And even if I did, I actually rather like spoilers.

Anyway, if you've done a bit of fixing, I'll go back and reread it.

[fajrdrako.livejournal.com]

By the time I get to see the show, I won't remember.

Yeah - I wouldn't either.

if you've done a bit of fixing

Yes, I'm done, finished, through with it. Slap my hand if I try to "fix" anything else. I should know when to declare a story finished and stop fiddling with it. Really! I have such trouble stopping at the end.