Wow. That is the most satisfying story I've read in a long time. It was incredibly sensuous and I loved how you let the tension build. It was amazing. I can't say it enough. Thank you for making my morning.
Mmmm, they are fun to write. Especially given the dynamics of the relationship... I love that there are so many possible "first time" scenarios that can be written.
Think of a conversation we had while you were writing it: did Lex have the feeling that Clark might show up that early, that day, and was he hoping to set up just the scenario that played out...?
Then again, I imagine that idea has already floated through your mind, eh?
I was indoors most of the day, but it seemed pretty nice out when I was out. Humid, but pleasant. Hope you had a good time at the Rideau Centre - I was there at lunchtime. I bought my lunch at the food court and ate it on the rooftop patio - they have the picnic benches out now. I love that spot. It's usually pretty quiet, too.
This was amazingly sensuous and yet at the same time you did a wonderful job of conveying Clark's growing confusion and frustration as he tried to deny what his body wanted of him.
Leave it to Lex to seize upon a way for Clark to make a move and for him to not make any himself until Clark was ready. I'd love to read it from Lex's POV and to see what happens next.
This was hot, sexy, beautiful, cute all in all perfect and wonderfull. I love the mentioning of the lemon scented oil and the little details while describing Lex' body. Very well written!
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Date: 2003-06-08 09:32 pm (UTC)Very hot.
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Date: 2003-06-09 03:08 pm (UTC)FB
Date: 2003-06-09 05:52 am (UTC)One suggestion, though. You mentioned originally conceiving this story as being from Lex's point of view.
How about that, too, hmm? That would be really cool. Hmm? Please??? Please!!!
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Date: 2003-06-09 08:22 am (UTC)You know I love Lex's point of view - on anything!
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Date: 2003-06-09 03:06 pm (UTC)Gail
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Date: 2003-06-09 04:14 pm (UTC)Re: FB
Date: 2003-06-10 03:54 pm (UTC)Then again, I imagine that idea has already floated through your mind, eh?
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Date: 2003-06-09 10:43 am (UTC)and, *waves from Ottawa*
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Date: 2003-06-09 03:12 pm (UTC)You're from Ottawa too - that's so cool! Looks as if we're about to get a storm.
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Date: 2003-06-09 05:38 pm (UTC)I hope it's better tomorrow, planned on shopping in Rideau. (okay, yes it is covered. But still..)
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Date: 2003-06-10 04:29 pm (UTC)This was very beautiful.
Date: 2003-06-09 10:45 am (UTC)This was amazingly sensuous and yet at the same time you did a wonderful job of conveying Clark's growing confusion and frustration as he tried to deny what his body wanted of him.
Leave it to Lex to seize upon a way for Clark to make a move and for him to not make any himself until Clark was ready. I'd love to read it from Lex's POV and to see what happens next.
Re: This was very beautiful.
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