FIC Torchwood (drabble) - Focus

[fajrdrako]

Title: Focus
Fandom: Torchwood
Characters: Jack/Ianto, Jack/John
Challenge: tw100, challenge: kiss, kiss
Rating: PG-13
Disclaimer: Not mine, no claims, all property of the BBC.
Notes: Spoilers for Torchwood 2x01, "Kiss, Kiss, Bang, Bang". Cross-posted to my LJ and to tw100.


Focus

Captain John Hart was good at assessing people quickly. The sexy doctor and the clever scientist were adorable, and the fierce girl-cop was a gorgeous armful, but it was Ianto Bloody Jones who earned John's particular hatred.

John knew Jack. Jack was always elusive, but John could see through his façades. Jack wanted Ianto. Ianto was playing hard to get - skittish, angry, desperate and hiding it. Jack was courting him carefully, revealing his need.

Ianto had everything John could ever want within his reach, and he didn't even know it. Couldn't see the value of what he had.

Bastard.

Comments

[cionaudha.livejournal.com]

Huh. That is extreeeeemely interesting.

skittish, angry, desperate and hiding it

Oh, yes! What an excellent insight!


You've made me feel for John, the intergalactic brat.

[fajrdrako.livejournal.com]

You've made me feel for John, the intergalactic brat.

I'm so glad!

Thanks for the wonderful comment.

[raissad.livejournal.com]

Cool. You got his voice down.

[fajrdrako.livejournal.com]

Thank you!

I like writing about him.

[of-too-minds.livejournal.com]

I like your characterization. You nailed all the boys and their motivations.

[fajrdrako.livejournal.com]

Thank you for the lovely comment.