FIC Torchwood (poem): Camping

[fajrdrako]

Title: Camping
Fandom: Torchwood
Author: fajrdrako
Characters: Ianto, Lisa
Genre: Poem #4
Rating: G
Disclaimer: Not mine, no claims, all property of the BBC.
Notes: No spoilers, though there are references relating to "Cyberwoman" and a line in "Countrycide". Ianto's voice. Cross-posted to my LJ and torch_wood. With thanks to damalan and fatchickengirl for inventing the form.


Camping

Camping was fun, once. I liked it.
You burned the sausages and the
Baked beans were shit. The tent got wet.
Even the dog was grumpy. But then,
Reason doesn't come into it.
We were young, so wrapped up in love,
Obsessed by it, by each other,
Mesmerized by fleshfilled senses
And intoxicated with joy.
Now I hate to camp without you.

~ ~ ~

Fourth in a series following Endings and Beginnings, Notes for Gwen Cooper and Time Present.

Comments

[damalan.livejournal.com]

Now that does a good job of showing the shadow on Ianto's heart by alluding to it. I like your poems - they feel so much... deeper than mine. :)

[fajrdrako.livejournal.com]

the shadow on Ianto's heart

What a great phrase. Mushes me just to read it. Makes me think the boy needs more TLC from Jack. A lot more.

I like your poems - they feel so much... deeper than mine. :)

It's sweet of you to say so but, really, they're not. I think yours are terrific. (This must be another meeting of the mutual admiration society.)

[damalan.livejournal.com]

Makes me think the boy needs more TLC from Jack. A lot more.

And all of it screen time! :)


I think yours are terrific.

Thank you. I'm sure there's something about the praise of the praiseworthy, but I can't recall it. ;)


meeting of the mutual admiration society

No, but you are much more wonderful than I am! :)

[fajrdrako.livejournal.com]

And all of it screen time! :)

Oooh yes, please. I wouldn't argue with that.

but you are much more wonderful than I am! :)

Now you've gone too far for credibility, you silver-tongued devil.