FIC Torchwood (poem): Camping

[fajrdrako]

Title: Camping
Fandom: Torchwood
Author: fajrdrako
Characters: Ianto, Lisa
Genre: Poem #4
Rating: G
Disclaimer: Not mine, no claims, all property of the BBC.
Notes: No spoilers, though there are references relating to "Cyberwoman" and a line in "Countrycide". Ianto's voice. Cross-posted to my LJ and torch_wood. With thanks to damalan and fatchickengirl for inventing the form.


Camping

Camping was fun, once. I liked it.
You burned the sausages and the
Baked beans were shit. The tent got wet.
Even the dog was grumpy. But then,
Reason doesn't come into it.
We were young, so wrapped up in love,
Obsessed by it, by each other,
Mesmerized by fleshfilled senses
And intoxicated with joy.
Now I hate to camp without you.

~ ~ ~

Fourth in a series following Endings and Beginnings, Notes for Gwen Cooper and Time Present.

Comments

[skywardprodigal.livejournal.com]

Just this morning, I was thinking about that scene between Ianto and Lisa, when she told him about looks and the dogs pissing on the tent. :)

Such love.

Thank you. :)

[fajrdrako.livejournal.com]

Just this morning, I was thinking about that scene between Ianto and Lisa,

I always enjoyed that as a bit of background, and I particularly enjoyed it in relation to Ianto's comment in "Countrycide" that he didn't like camping. I thought about it more than it was worth. Had he just gone camping with Lisa because she wanted to? Had he expected to like it an didn't, because of the dog and the rain? Or had the events of "Cybewoman" soured his memories? There could be all sorts of ways to look at it.

Thank you for commenting so nicely.