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Jun. 13th, 2003 10:18 pm
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Challenge 13: "Lost!" "Someone in Smallville has lost something important. It's up to you whether you want it to be found, but show us who, and what!" (144 words)

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The Ross boy feels no fear. He doesn't know he is living on borrowed time. He thinks he stole my kryptonite key with impunity, and that I don't know what he did.

True, I have no idea how he took it, since it was not on his person when he left the caves. Nor do I know why - perhaps to protect his friend Clark Kent, thinking that I planned to use it against him. Perhaps he stole it for some more subtle reason of his own.

He mocked me.

How merciful shall I be? His luck will disappear. Misfortunes and accidents will fall upon him and his family, none of them traceable to me. His marks will fall, drugs will be found in his locker, he will contract a mysterious lingering illness.

He will never guess I caused his pain.

Only I will know.

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Date: 2003-06-13 07:30 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] scribblinlenore.livejournal.com
Ahhhh. Poor Pete! Wow. That was so chilling and exactly the way I imagine Lionel thinking. Nicely done!

Date: 2003-06-13 07:55 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] fajrdrako.livejournal.com
Thank you. I don't think it's particularly safe to defy Lionel Luthor - unless you happen to be Lex.

Date: 2003-06-13 10:02 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] justblue0162.livejournal.com
Ooooh, creepy and very ominous. Just like Lionel.

He mocked me.

I love that, standing on its own. There's such a sense of disbelief there, with cold rage just peeking out around the edges. Very nice!

Date: 2003-06-14 07:24 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] fajrdrako.livejournal.com
Thank you! I love Lionel's badness. I can't believe he'd just forget this incident, or Pete's role in it.

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