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I couldn't let Christmas go by without writing some sort of Christmas ficlet. I may write more.

Title: Starry Night
Fandom: Horatio Hornblower

Starry Night

Christmas Eve: the sea was calm, the breeze was fresh, and Captain Horatio Hornblower had dismissed his Lieutenants in various stages of inebriation. The doctor, worried about a recent amputation, had departed to visit his patient below, and Horatio was free to stand alone on the deck, to listen to the silence of the night.

The night was not entirely silent, of course. A ship never sleeps. But the sky was as clear and starry as he had ever seen it. He looked up at the sky and wondered what to make of his dramatic patchwork of a life. Was he happy? Tonight, he was content.

He thought about another man, half the world away. What was
Pellew doing this night? He had done so much to shape Horatio's life; to give it meaning.

A Captain's life was characteristically lonely. Wives and sweethearts were left ashore. Lovers of the other type could
not be kept close. Yet the briefest of times with loved ones made all the rest bearable.

While Edward Pellew was alive, Horatio would never feel truly solitary.

He had a small flask of rum in his pocket, and used it to salute a bright star above that shone also over Pellew. "Thank you," he murmured, "for everything."

Date: 2005-12-24 07:23 pm (UTC)
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From: [personal profile] fairestcat
oh, lovely.

Date: 2005-12-24 08:10 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] fajrdrako.livejournal.com
So glad you liked it!

Date: 2005-12-25 01:05 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lilithlotr.livejournal.com
What a wonderful thought. Thanks for this!

Date: 2005-12-25 08:24 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] fajrdrako.livejournal.com
Thank you for you're comment. Much appreciated.

Date: 2005-12-25 09:03 pm (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] rosiespark.livejournal.com
That's lovely. Horatio who is alone and yet not. I love the way you underline the connection between him and Pellew.

Date: 2005-12-25 11:32 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] fajrdrako.livejournal.com
Thank you! It's so signifcant to both of them... at least in my mind.

Date: 2005-12-25 11:47 pm (UTC)
ext_15621: The Pixel in a paper bag (Default)
From: [identity profile] rosiespark.livejournal.com
I love the way you do Horatio/Pellew, even though I am a H/A shipper at heart, as you well know. :)

I posted Interlude earlier today - and had a startling revelation while driving to my parents' house this morning - that the things I love about Renown-era Archie are very Lymond-ish. Hmm. More (http://www.livejournal.com/users/rosiespark/49316.html?nc=2) in my reply to [livejournal.com profile] inlovewithnight's comment on the fic.

Date: 2005-12-26 08:58 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] fajrdrako.livejournal.com
though I am a H/A shipper at heart

Understood - and I love the way you are so tolerant of my Horatio/Pellew fixation.

Your Archie is indeed rather Lymond-like; fair hair, smart mouth, nobly suicidal tendencies. I see less of that in the Archie of the show than you do, but that's okay too; I can still enjoy your version thoroughly. There is lots of room for many interpretations of these characters.

Date: 2005-12-27 12:47 am (UTC)
ext_15621: The Pixel in a paper bag (Default)
From: [identity profile] rosiespark.livejournal.com
I don't just tolerate it, I adore your Horatio/Pellew fic. So there. ;P

Your Archie is indeed rather Lymond-like; fair hair, smart mouth, nobly suicidal tendencies.

He is, isn't he? Which may be why you thought (very flatteringly!) that parts of Interlude felt vaguely Dunnettish. Maybe Archie deliberately provoking Bush echoes some of Lymond's less happy scenes with Jerrott? How interesting! And not all that surprising, really, seeing that I've been reading Dunnett for seventeen years.

The funny thing is that, although it now seems so obvious, it hadn't occurred to me before yesterday.

Date: 2005-12-27 02:36 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] fajrdrako.livejournal.com
Maybe Archie deliberately provoking Bush echoes some of Lymond's less happy scenes with Jerrott?

Hee - I never thought of Bush as Jerott-like before! But yes, you have that dynamic going on.

Funny what we'll write when we don't realize it.

Date: 2005-12-26 08:59 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] fajrdrako.livejournal.com
As a sort of P.S. - I wanted to feature Bush in this (as one of the Lieutenants) but I also wanted to make it short and sweet, and he seemed liked too much of a digression, so I took him out. Pity.

Date: 2005-12-27 12:51 am (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] rosiespark.livejournal.com
I think you were right to take him out, since he would have distracted from the focus on Horatio and Pellew. Pity, though. Can you not write him into something else? Please? :)

Date: 2005-12-27 02:33 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] fajrdrako.livejournal.com
Yes indeed I can - your wish is my command.

Date: 2005-12-27 03:33 pm (UTC)
ext_15621: The Pixel in a paper bag (Default)
From: [identity profile] rosiespark.livejournal.com
Ooh! You're the second person to say that to me in the space of a few days. Heh.

And [livejournal.com profile] dargie has promised to appoint me Grand Wazoobob once our army conquers Europe with our marshmallow guns, so I shall soon have countless numbers of slaves to do my bidding...

Date: 2005-12-27 06:40 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] fajrdrako.livejournal.com
Uh-oh, I'd better get writing!

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