FIC: Torchwood (drabble) - Brat

[fajrdrako]

Title: Brat
Author: fajrdrako
Fandom: Torchwood
Characters: Jack/John, the Torchwood team
Challenge: tw100, challenge: children
Rating: G
Disclaimer: Not mine, no claims, all property of the BBC.
Notes: Cross-posted to my lj and to tw100.


Brat

When Captain John walked into the Hub, he kissed Jack first thing. Ianto rolled his eyes. Jack kissed back - then pulled away.

John hit him.

Jack hit back.

"Boys!" said Gwen, not even looking up.

"He's such a child," said John, aggrieved, licking blood off his lip. He wanted to go on fighting.

"You're the child," said Jack. "Behave."

"Ah, but I'm a good child!"

"You're a brat."

"Wear it like a badge. And it's bigger than yours, too. Got any work for me?"

Gwen dropped her head on her monitor in despair.

Ianto smirked. "There goes the neighbourhood."

Comments

[devohoneybee.livejournal.com]

hee! perfect. loved Gwen not looking up. *s*

[fajrdrako.livejournal.com]

Thank you.

loved Gwen not looking up.

She knows what she's dealing with, poor woman.

[star-momma.livejournal.com]

hehe Mom's gonna give someone a spanking... and I can't blame her wanting to ;)

[fajrdrako.livejournal.com]

So very true!

Thanks for commenting.

[darthhellokitty.livejournal.com]

And Ianto just rolls his eyes; he knows better than to take this seriously.

[fajrdrako.livejournal.com]

Oh, yes - clever Ianto knows exactly what it's worth.

[51stcenturyfox.livejournal.com]

Brilliant! And the last line killed me.

Gwen... is clearly fed up.

[fajrdrako.livejournal.com]

Thanks for the nice comments.

Gwen... is clearly fed up.

Can you blame her?

[51stcenturyfox.livejournal.com]

Not in the least!

[order_of_chaos]

I so want this to be canon.

Love the last two lines especially.

[fajrdrako.livejournal.com]

Thank you. I wish it would be canon. I want more about Captain John. I really do.

[jackarono.livejournal.com]

I so want him to work at Torchwood. Freelance. I mean, the minute he starts worrying about his pension, he's lost me. :)

[fajrdrako.livejournal.com]

John's not going to worry about his pension. No fears. I want him with all his snarl, fizz and sparkle. There's no taming our Captain John!

[aeron-lanart.livejournal.com]

"You're a brat."

"Wear it like a badge. And it's bigger than yours, too.

Well that's John telling the truth for a change - he *is* a bigger brat. I love the reactions of the other two (or more specifically the lack thereof).
Hee!

[fajrdrako.livejournal.com]

So glad you enjoyed!

I find John an infinite source of entertainment.

[raissad.livejournal.com]

Lovely. :)

[fajrdrako.livejournal.com]

Thank you.

[hab318princess.livejournal.com]

*giggles*

thanks, that is brilliant!

[fajrdrako.livejournal.com]

Big happy grin - thank you!

[jo02]

I would so love John to join the team . . . sigh . . .

[fajrdrako.livejournal.com]

Me too!

He'd be such a great addition.

JB Talks TW Comic

[raissad.livejournal.com]

Check it out:
http://scifipulse.net/?p=5449

Re: JB Talks TW Comic

[fajrdrako.livejournal.com]

We were talking earlier about bad interviews - not, that is a good one. Everyone should all be interviewed by Carole Barrowman. Or maybe it's just that everyone should be interviewed by their sister!