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Title: Outside the Government
Author: [livejournal.com profile] fajrdrako
Fandom: Torchwood
Characters: Jack, Gwen, Ianto
Challenge: [livejournal.com profile] tw100, challenge: politics
Rating: PG
Disclaimer: Not mine, no claims, all property of the BBC.
Notes: Cross-posted to my lj and to tw100.


Outside the Government

"How can you stand being unable to vote?" asked Gwen. "Barred from the parliamentary process?"

"'Outside the government.'" Jack quoted his own tagline.

"Did you ever vote for anyone?" asked Ianto.

Jack considered. "Voted for Pericles once."

Pause. "You weren't Athenian."

"No. It was illegal as hell. But he was the best - the sure thing."

Ianto said thoughtfully, "Did you just vote because you were sleeping with him?"

Gwen gasped. "No! Jack? You didn't!"

"I don't kiss and tell."

"Liar! You tell all the time."

Jack chuckled, taking his coffee - and his secrets - back to his office.


Date: 2009-01-20 06:57 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] rustydog.livejournal.com
Ha! This is so Jack, cryptic, playing with history, but with that layer of seriousness underneath.

This is a great example of how you can get a full, lively conversation in to 100 words, too. Great!

Date: 2009-01-20 07:18 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] fajrdrako.livejournal.com
Thanks for the wonderful comments.

This is a great example of how you can get a full, lively conversation in to 100 words, too.

I had to do an incredible amount of fiddling to get the word count right. Lucky thing Jack is terse!

Date: 2009-01-20 07:04 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] donutsweeper.livejournal.com
Jack would *so* have done that

Date: 2009-01-20 07:18 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] fajrdrako.livejournal.com
Yes, he would have, wouldn't he? Heh. That's our Jack!

Date: 2009-01-20 08:50 pm (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] rosiespark.livejournal.com
Nice voices in this one - I can hear all three of them! Made me laugh. :)

Date: 2009-01-20 11:00 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] fajrdrako.livejournal.com
Made me laugh. :)

So glad I did! I love writing about those people.

Date: 2009-01-21 12:10 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] neadods.livejournal.com
*giggle*snort*

Date: 2009-01-21 12:27 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] fajrdrako.livejournal.com
Grin - glad you liked it!

Date: 2009-01-22 12:49 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] raissad.livejournal.com
Great. :)

Date: 2009-01-22 05:14 am (UTC)

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