It's a little like a divertissement in ballet, where there's an "entertainment" and everyone takes a turn. It all makes sense, I just feel like it needs tightening up.
Yes; it's amusing, but doesn't add to the 'main plot' of the action. No, I can't think of any way to fix it either, just to zip it along as best you can.
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Date: 2008-08-17 06:43 pm (UTC)Yes; it's amusing, but doesn't add to the 'main plot' of the action. No, I can't think of any way to fix it either, just to zip it along as best you can.