Tilt a Whirl...
Oct. 7th, 2007 01:40 pmI finished reading Tilt a Whirl by Chris Grabenstein today. It has a quick, breezy style, with not much intensity to it. It was another mystery somewhat spoiled because I guessed the motive and the killer shortly after the murder was committed; from that point it all looked so obvious that the protagonists must be blind to be looking in all the wrong places. Does no one think cui bono any more? Or is it just that the mystery writers are hoping we'll go off on their various tangents with them, distracted from the main theme till they're ready to reveal it?
In any case, the book had two stylistic problems for me. One was that it was all written in the present tense. I can stand this in short doses - the occasional fanfic, the first chapter of Warchild - but it becomes quickly irritating in a full length novel, especially since I could see no reason for it.
The second problem was of narrative voice. I love first person narrative in mystery novels - Spenser, Marlowe, Carlotta Carlyle, Kinsey Milhone, Falco - but only when it's the detective protagonist whose viewpoint we are getting. If it's a sidekick - as with Sherlock Holmes' Watson or Nero Wolfe's Archie Goodwin - I quickly lose sympathy. The sidekick usually comes across as a guileless schmo.
In this case, the detective is John Ceepak, a homicide detective in the resort town of Sea Haven, New Jersey. His sidekick is Danny Boyle, a young part time cop. I didn't know they had part time cops in the States. Maybe they have them in Canada, too - what do I know? Ceepak is large, tough, an ex-marine with the habits and morals of a boy scout. I kept thinking "Batman" but not the way I like Batman best: not the sexy Dark Knight side of him, just the boy scout side of him.
So: pleasantly readable, but I wouldn't go looking for another book by this author.